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ยป Comics - Prologue - Page 1 - June 29th, 2009, 9:00 am

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The Management Says:
Ele_Mental, June 29th, 2009, 7:27 am

Korant: New Prologue
Well, as I mentioned in a previous announcement, I have chosen to scrap the original prologue for Blood Mantle in favor of one that had a better flow, hopefully has better dialogue, and better art.

I am doing this because I found that a number of readers were left confused by the prologue (I overused the darkening element) and not in the manner which I had intended. Therefore starting today I am re-releasing the comic with the new prologue. I will release a page daily until I reach the point at which the comic went on hiatus, which was the end of chapter 2. The reason for this schedule of reuploading is both to provide me a few days to complete the editing for the last few pages of the Prologue and to give me time to start working on Chapter 3.
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Now My Views On This Actual Page:
In hindsight I should have had at least one more building in the background of the first panel as it currently looks a little flat.
Also I probably shouldn't have used so many pattern-layers as I was only just really getting used to using them.
This is nitpicking, I guess, but I don't really have too much to criticize on this one, mostly because there isn't much present to judge it on. Still I do like how this page turned out so I guess it's good (and makes a hell of a lot more sense than the original.)




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