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ยป Comics - Prologue - Page 1 - June 29th, 2009, 9:00 am

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Ele_Mental, June 29th, 2009, 7:27 am

Korant: New Prologue
Well, as I mentioned in a previous announcement, I have chosen to scrap the original prologue for Blood Mantle in favor of one that had a better flow, hopefully has better dialogue, and better art.

I am doing this because I found that a number of readers were left confused by the prologue (I overused the darkening element) and not in the manner which I had intended. Therefore starting today I am re-releasing the comic with the new prologue. I will release a page daily until I reach the point at which the comic went on hiatus, which was the end of chapter 2. The reason for this schedule of reuploading is both to provide me a few days to complete the editing for the last few pages of the Prologue and to give me time to start working on Chapter 3.
Now My Views On This Actual Page:
In hindsight I should have had at least one more building in the background of the first panel as it currently looks a little flat.
Also I probably shouldn't have used so many pattern-layers as I was only just really getting used to using them.
This is nitpicking, I guess, but I don't really have too much to criticize on this one, mostly because there isn't much present to judge it on. Still I do like how this page turned out so I guess it's good (and makes a hell of a lot more sense than the original.)

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